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heard from Amy today and now know the changes to the idea. I think this idea will work a lot better as it is a bit simpler but still with the same general idea of the man and his daughter. I did have questions about why he burgled the house and the mother not knowing but she soon made this clearer to me with the daughter being adopted etc... Sorry again i couldn't make the meeting yesterday but Amy has filled me in and i like the idea and the changes you guys have all made to it. See you tomorrow for last adjustments before the pitch!