i definately agree amy. Annie's point about Jakes character is very important to making the story successful. If the audience don't sympathise and empathise with Jake then it has been unsuccessful and the ending wont be as dramatic. We had many ideas about Jake and his character before we came up with the burglary idea so we could just keep these ideas in the film like Amy suggested rather than straight swapping them, bringing in elements of humour in the office like we originally planned would help the audience to relate Jake.

Also Tom ive listened to some of the links you posted. I used the free music archive last week in editing and there is a lot of good music on there which we could use as it is not copyrighted. However if you wanted to recreate the music i think that would work really well as you could add your own input.

well done guys on the pitch on tuesday.